Thursday 30 August 2018

miss west point of view

The mother sheep followed me around the path picking up

her past she realised at a touching  dissidents of her lam

she let out a load leap that echoed across the paddick the

sleep lam lifted her head and turns towards us and slowly

returning to its sleep as  the sheep got closer and closer i

thought i should run i began to panic was she going to

attack me holding my breath i froze i

sided as the sheep


dodged me as protectively to its lam few

That was a close call

Monday 27 August 2018

dmic 1 book


so me and my group are gonna work on sharing our ideas with the group and focusing for DMIC and sharing the book and penceil

Thursday 23 August 2018

DMIC 2 book



so me and DMIC group did our DMIC task so my group is going to focus on his sharing the book and pencil with the group

Tuesday 21 August 2018

peephole narrrative

One day  Two boy called josh and joe went for a walk on the path. until they heard the volcano erupting the lava started to spread more  and so they go to on the roof for safety. and stay so they won't get burnt from the lava but then they forgot the blankets and the bellows. but they were to late. so they slept up on the roof for the night.after there big rest they noticed the volcano stopped.later that day
It came back it even worse than before it burned everything so josh and joe had to jump so they did`but josh didn't see joe but then joe showed up he was  bleeding on his arm from the lava then joe nearly got hit on arm but it missed and then they escaped and got away in time and went the volcano but then joe fell in the volcano and died and then josh  went back
to the the town and went to sleep up on the roof by himself and then this  happened joe game back and he told him how he got out alive then they had another rest woke up  and they went to the volcano and noticed that it was all not erupting but last night it erupted  so they went off the hill and went for a swim in the reven when it reached 3.00 a clock They went back to the house and went inside and everything .was  burnt inside and then they saw there rooms and there stuff in there rooms weren’t burnt and and there black were and there balows so they got then went to sleep then they woke up and had a another swim in the reven for a while
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writting and plannning

It was Monday the first day back at school we all went to assembly and we all saw the team's movies that the teacher did they were all amazing team 5 was looked cool as the the funny part was will Mr Goodwin  will ever get a high five and team 4 was a yoga class movie and team 3 was cool and team 2 and 1 then all of us went to class

DMIC 1

last week we did our DMIC group so my group will focus on sharing our idea with  the group