Showing posts with label Writing 2018.. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2018.. Show all posts

Wednesday, 28 November 2018

limerick Task


    











Once there was a boy in  GI
                                     His credit card would always declined
                                    Every Sunday he was bored on Monday
                                     He bit a cord he wanted to be a lord
                                     He wanted a toy sword he went forward

                                     But tripped over a cord he got up and got the
                                     Toy sword but then tripped over a cord
                                      Then he down like he always will never be a
                                       Lord without a sword then he went home
                                       And wanted a ice cream cone he felt so
                                        Alone










                                             
           

                                     

Wednesday, 21 November 2018

Animation Voice Over

Characters? 3 warriors  
Setting? The forest
Problem? The wolf is too fast

Solution? They shoot arrows at the wolf's legs

Many years ago there was a tribe who wanted to hunt a dire wolf. But
They didn't have enough power until one day they had a strategy.


So they went to there cave and stole their meat. Then one goes and a spear kills one of them.
The mover and cub run back. The mother gets killed and the pub.
now they have enough food for the months the .end.


so this is my animation voice over this voice over is for when our animation is done and we can
enplane it when it going down the slides




HOPE U LIKE I here is the link

Thursday, 15 November 2018

keyhole narrative part 2

One day there were three kids and their names were called jack James and may once when they were walking down the tunnel they saw a floating island and they were curious how was it was floating so they jumped on the island James when in the house and explored jack went down the the mental hole
Then he got stuck James was so distracted that he didn't know jack was  stuck 2 hours and was asleep then he woke 1 hour later he got out and was angry at James when they saw may
She was so scared they grabbed may when they went outside
When they were outside they realised that they were leaving the town on the floating island after 2 days they were still
On the floating island from a dissents they saw the town
But when they got closer it wasn't the town it was just another
Town they were sad :(  so went back in the house then jack got
Stuck back in the mental tunnel  may saw spiders and freaked out so much she ran outside and James fell down the mental tunnel and got stuck with jack

It was night time then may was wondering where James and
Jack was she look down the mental then fall down the mental tunnel and all 3 of them were stuck another 1 day past then they escape the mental tunnel  then they were at another village at the village they saw a house so they went inside and had dinner and had a rest


The next day past then the floating island was still there they went on the floating island and went off when they were going
They saw another village they saw so much villagers they didn't like the floating then they saw there village .the end.






Thursday, 1 November 2018

that really stinks


  • One day Sam was in the bathroom on his sisters phone when he was on his sister phone. he was doing a fart noise when he was playing it a tentacle came out of the toilet. then 3 more came out when Sam turned around the tentacles tried to get the phone. then they finally got it and went in the sewers in the sewers the crocodiles were the taxes so Sam did it to  when Sam was catching up he arrived at the monster's lair. And saw 5 more monsters.one was dark purple and the other 2 we light purple and the small one was pink and there was one boy the was red and there was the dad the dad was the one that Tock the phone and the Mom was purple.and the whole family was by the rock and the dad was holding the phone and was curious how Sam played the fart noise
  • so this is my based on a movie and we had to right about the end and see who got the ending right
  • and who ever did would get a chocolate egg and so the movie is based on this bot sam who gots his sisters



hope u like it     

Wednesday, 24 October 2018

writing recount

it started at 1.34 then we went to the skydiving place i felt really nervous so my first start
I got the hang of it so i did it more then i tried a better one but my brother tried a better one it was only for 17  year old or over i was sad :( but then i tried the same one and i got used to it i did it so much i forgot my lunch in my bag then i went to my parents but they u were not aloud food in there so we went then went rock climbing it was fun my first rock climbing one was a hard one it was calls blocks
It was fun and i completed it then i got i band around my wrist then the overs i tried for hours until we had some pizza it was fun so i tried more and more until i was tired and sweating so i drank some water and i had my energy back so i went on more


Next one i tried was volcano it was awesome it was a medium   after volcano i tried the green stork it awesome too then i saw the adults they looked cool i really wanted  to try but kids weren't aloud next one i tried the rocket ship it was fun real fun


After that one i tried the temple it was fun and awesome it was so big u  could race people too that was my fav until we had to go but we stayed for 2 more hours it was so fun for me there were even video games after to hours of rock climbing and video game  we stayed another 2 hours


Then me and my brother had one last rock climb then we went to the video games and play our arms off it was fun then we went for more rock climbing then more and more


The more we did the more stayed then we did more and more til we stopped and did video games  i did this gun game when u have to shoot these alien ships down to get ships to get points and i got all of them down i was good at the game then i did a racing game that was good at the game to then i went rock climbing again it was wicked then i went on the volcano again then we had to find Izaak that was hiding in the pirate ship


Then all of the kids and i stayed more and more then we all were waiting in line for the extreme er it was the best after 30 mins it was finally my turn and it was epic so i did it took me 40 mins just to get up but it was worth it and it then after that on the speaker they said we all had to leave


Tuesday, 11 September 2018

draft 1



  

Equipment:
What materials/things do you need for your sport?

Objective/ Goal:
What is the goal of your game? How do players win?


Tennis rackets and a ball
we are learning how to make our own games
  • The task is to make our own game
    • I enjoyed it a lot
      • Choosing the equipment

Setting:
Where can your game be played
everywhere

Competition/ Cooperation:
Explain how the players have to cooperate. Explain how the players compete.
U have to keep bouncing the  ball up and down until you get tired


layers:
How many players are needed? How many teams are there?
10 players and 2 teams


Thursday, 30 August 2018

miss west point of view

The mother sheep followed me around the path picking up

her past she realised at a touching  dissidents of her lam

she let out a load leap that echoed across the paddick the

sleep lam lifted her head and turns towards us and slowly

returning to its sleep as  the sheep got closer and closer i

thought i should run i began to panic was she going to

attack me holding my breath i froze i

sided as the sheep


dodged me as protectively to its lam few

That was a close call

Tuesday, 21 August 2018

peephole narrrative

One day  Two boy called josh and joe went for a walk on the path. until they heard the volcano erupting the lava started to spread more  and so they go to on the roof for safety. and stay so they won't get burnt from the lava but then they forgot the blankets and the bellows. but they were to late. so they slept up on the roof for the night.after there big rest they noticed the volcano stopped.later that day
It came back it even worse than before it burned everything so josh and joe had to jump so they did`but josh didn't see joe but then joe showed up he was  bleeding on his arm from the lava then joe nearly got hit on arm but it missed and then they escaped and got away in time and went the volcano but then joe fell in the volcano and died and then josh  went back
to the the town and went to sleep up on the roof by himself and then this  happened joe game back and he told him how he got out alive then they had another rest woke up  and they went to the volcano and noticed that it was all not erupting but last night it erupted  so they went off the hill and went for a swim in the reven when it reached 3.00 a clock They went back to the house and went inside and everything .was  burnt inside and then they saw there rooms and there stuff in there rooms weren’t burnt and and there black were and there balows so they got then went to sleep then they woke up and had a another swim in the reven for a while
Soon later at
















writting and plannning

It was Monday the first day back at school we all went to assembly and we all saw the team's movies that the teacher did they were all amazing team 5 was looked cool as the the funny part was will Mr Goodwin  will ever get a high five and team 4 was a yoga class movie and team 3 was cool and team 2 and 1 then all of us went to class

Thursday, 26 July 2018

team 4 animation 2018

so we did our animation plan for this year for us all fours so hope u like it

Friday, 29 June 2018

sky diving recount

Last Month i went sky diving in Attica .when i was  really shaking but when i jumped out we were 33.00000 feet from the ground.   and it took us a few seconds to reach the ground then we went past a mountain.  and we saw i big rocks on the mountains .and  we went pasted some more rocks on the right and t we went passed the snow on the mountain  after we went passed more snow on another mountain and it took US 10 Mins to reach the grass then i landed

Friday, 25 May 2018

assembly recount

 ...i hope u like this idk if u do



2018 choose it narrative



On one night a plane was just flying around UNTIL someone interrupted his flight then a guy with a water jet came out of nowhere HE pushed him off his plane the plane guy tackled the water jet guy down they were fighting under water UNTIL the saw there own machines fighting on themselves for hours until they ran out of power and landed on the pilots of the machines then a cyclone came and washed there machines away.they couldn't stop the cyclone s they worked together to stop it after hours they still couldn’t stop it so they both went in the they died