Tuesday 21 August 2018

peephole narrrative

One day  Two boy called josh and joe went for a walk on the path. until they heard the volcano erupting the lava started to spread more  and so they go to on the roof for safety. and stay so they won't get burnt from the lava but then they forgot the blankets and the bellows. but they were to late. so they slept up on the roof for the night.after there big rest they noticed the volcano stopped.later that day
It came back it even worse than before it burned everything so josh and joe had to jump so they did`but josh didn't see joe but then joe showed up he was  bleeding on his arm from the lava then joe nearly got hit on arm but it missed and then they escaped and got away in time and went the volcano but then joe fell in the volcano and died and then josh  went back
to the the town and went to sleep up on the roof by himself and then this  happened joe game back and he told him how he got out alive then they had another rest woke up  and they went to the volcano and noticed that it was all not erupting but last night it erupted  so they went off the hill and went for a swim in the reven when it reached 3.00 a clock They went back to the house and went inside and everything .was  burnt inside and then they saw there rooms and there stuff in there rooms weren’t burnt and and there black were and there balows so they got then went to sleep then they woke up and had a another swim in the reven for a while
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